Three Possible Situations…

ONE: You just spent weeks, endless hours, maybe even months pouring over an ad for your own business. Now you’re not so sure about it…
TWO: You put up the ad on your website, or you mailed it out… and the results you got were d-i-s-m-a-l… What happened???
THREE: The sales letter isn’t pulling in the response like it used to. Is it time to move on or refresh your copy?

Here’s what you need to do…

Borrow A Pair
of Professional Eyeballs

Get A Copy Critique For Your
Sales Letter, Website or Direct Mail Piece

Colin Y.J. Chung, Marketing Strategist & Copywriter
Colin Y.J. Chung is a marketing strategist, copywriter & consultant based out of Port Moody, BC and Austin, TX. He helps business owners get their customers to buy more and more often. He can be reached at 1 (888) 317- 9995 or at colin (at) colincopy (dot) com.

Do you know who is the business owner’s worst enemy? Himself or herself… the minute they finish a piece of sales copy. Here are two big reasons why.

First, they are “copy-blind”.

No matter what kind of writing you do, it is a very personal and emotional activity. You are pouring your heart, soul and mind into it.

When you’re done writing, you fluctuate between “this is the greatest thing I’ve ever written” and “this is complete and utter crap. No one will read it, much less buy from it”.

And the truth of the matter is, both extremes are WRONG.

An objective and professional third party, such as myself, can tell you where in the middle you stand… and where to move forward in order to get more sales out of your ad.

Second, they’re too close to the product.

Most business owners love their products (or service). They are passionate about it. They know it inside out… all its features, its evolutionary history, and tons of stories to boot.

But very few of those things I just rattled off SELL.

Industry Experience:

  • Airbrush Cosmetics
  • Business Consulting
  • Database Analysis
  • Event Accommodations
  • Financial Newsletters
  • Financial Planning
  • Learning Disability Re-mediation
  • List Brokerage
  • Luxury Resort Accommodations
  • Marketing Consulting
  • Media Buyers
  • Mortgage Brokerage
  • Naturopathic Fertility
  • ENT (Ear, Nose & Throat)
  • Parenting Coaching
  • Private Lending
  • Veteran Disability Law
  • Wedding Photography

Info-Product
Niche Market Experience:

  • Copywriting Coaching
  • Day Trading Alert Service
  • Education Tutoring
  • Forex Trading Systems
  • Holistic Health Diets
  • Marketing Seminars
  • Real Estate Foreclosures
  • Real Estate Investing
  • Stock Investment Newsletters
  • Tax Liens Investing

I’ve had many clients who sing and shout about how great their product is, but have forgotten the final judge… is the prospect with the wallet.

A professional copywriter can help you choose and improve the right elements in your sales copy to maximize sales.

But more important, weed out the parts that “un-sell” your product.

Here’s How A Professional
Critique Can Help

A trained professional comes into the picture fresh. He hasn’t been mired in research, brainstorming and writing. He can quickly see what needs to be changed, updated, edited, revised or scrapped.

More importantly, an experienced copywriter has years of studying winning advertisements. Seen split-tests at first hand. Knows what works, what doesn’t and for what market.

I can help you with all this.

Plus, if you take a look at my experience in diverse industries and markets, you know I can bring a lot or fresh insights into your marketing.

However, the best part is, it’s quite affordable. Compared to what I charge to write the copy itself, it is a steal. You’ll get your copy heavily documented with changes, suggestions and revisions for a mere $1,000 and it will only take a week to get back.

Consider the value of this. If you can double your conversion rate with my changes, you will quickly have the critique paid for.

Here’s What Will Happen
When You Request A Critique

  1. When you book your critique, and you invest with me, I will ask you a few questions over the phone.

  2. You send the ad my way. You can mail, fax, e-mail or tell me the website.

  3. I’ll call you if I have further questions

  4. In one week, I’ll book a meeting with you to go over the suggested changes. The call is taped, so you won’t have to scribble notes.

  5. You’ll also get your copy back in a PDF document with “Track Changes” turned on, so you can see the original and the changes.

And that’s it.

How You Can Get This
Critique Completely FREE

When I present my review notes to you, and you are in complete agreement with my changes, edits and revisions… you may want to consider hiring me to rewrite the copy for you.

Here’s what I’ll do if you decide to go that route. I will knock off the price of the critique from the project fee.

It’s a win-win situation for both of us.

  • You get a discount on my project fee
  • I get your business and hopefully more in the future
  • You get to “test-drive” my expertise at a low rate.
  • I will have done a good bulk of the background work for writing your copy
  • You get expedited service on your copy since a portion of work is already done
  • I get to turn out copy work for you faster, saving both of us time.

Of course, you’re not obligated in any way to hire me, even if you love my critique.

Here’s What To Do Next

First, let’s get on the phone to chat for 20 minutes. I personally like to do business with people I can talk to. To do that, leave a message with me at 1 (888) 317-9995.

Or, you can fill out the form below…

Looking forward to our call.

Sincerely,
Colin Y.J. Chung's Signature
Colin Y.J. Chung
Marketing Strategist, Consultant & Copywriter
1 (888) 317-9995